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Kevin Snyder's avatar

love the Cadence/Rhythm line.

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Debi Hassler-Never Forsaken's avatar

You are a poet

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Nick Makiej's avatar

“Maybe it needs flesh and blood”. Felt that line.

Like an earnest grasping for something.

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Aberdeen Livingstone's avatar

"My Body— / the hymn." Love this.

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